24th May 2020, 2:02 AM
(This post was last modified: 24th May 2020, 2:05 AM by Lunanova. Edited 2 times in total.
Edit Reason: IDK THINGS
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Nice! Definitely could be played in a Ye Old Castle Town in a video game. I haven't heard any of your other stuff so I don't have further reference but: Do you usually stick to 1 phrase for your compositions? It might make things feel fresh to throw in a B section. But it would probably be weird to have 1 B section amongst many A's so you'd have to play around with having a couple in there I'd imagine.
How do you feel about this transition:
If your bass is playing 1...2...4...3.2. (1 is high) then after doing that phrase having 3major, 3minor, 1major, 2major (maybe twice?)
It sounds like a good way to end the song too, has like a resolving sign of relief feeling.
I also am not classically trained nor do I write classical music so... take my words with like 4 grains of salt
EDIT: Also IDK what a polyphonic canon is so this suggestion might be against those rulesssssssss
How do you feel about this transition:
If your bass is playing 1...2...4...3.2. (1 is high) then after doing that phrase having 3major, 3minor, 1major, 2major (maybe twice?)
It sounds like a good way to end the song too, has like a resolving sign of relief feeling.
I also am not classically trained nor do I write classical music so... take my words with like 4 grains of salt
EDIT: Also IDK what a polyphonic canon is so this suggestion might be against those rulesssssssss
