Yesterday, 2:22 PM
Tbh I expected you to just describe what you wanna do instead of write the story.
Except for like when your character is talking (speech) since you kind of have to say exactly what you want to say.
You can write like that if you want though. I might have to change things around to fit the narrative.
The Spaceship
After the woman approaches the man, she sticks her hands out. On her right hand are a large pile of grey jumpsuits. On her left hand are a pile of... Also grey jumpsuits? Except they look a bit more frilly? It is difficult to discern the difference. She looks as though she hopes Sonny will take one, but he does not seem to be reacting whatsoever. He just continues to stare.
The Pink-Haired Woman:
"Do you want to...?" she asks as she continues to offer the items, waggling them a bit, while her eyes dart between the clothes and the man. "Oh... Um.. Right."
She stacks the clothing on top of each other in order to pull out a booklet.
The Pink-Haired Woman:
Reading from the booklet, she begins, "Hello there! I am insert name here-... Errr... Opps." she closes her eyes and stops for a second. "I mean... Let me just start over, okay?..."
The Pink-Haired Woman:
"Hello there! I am Jesika, your greeter. And we or I depending on how ma-... um..." she pauses to gather herself. "We... I welcome you to the UTSS 15. The current year is 2225 and you have just emerged from one of our state-of-the-art cryogenic chambers, trademarked as Caissons. You may be confused about many things, but it is important to remember to take things slowly! There is plenty of time to ask all and any questions that you have, and all will be answered appropriately, but we at UnionTransit ask that you first clothe yourself with one of the garments provided, as well as attach your ID Badge, before anything else. This is because-"
Sonny Sunlight:
"What?" interrupts Sonny.
The Pink-Haired Woman - Jesika:
She halts reading and raises her eyes. "Er- Well... Well, you are naked." she mentions, while trying to look away. "One of these is a jumpsuit and the other is a jumpskirt. They are both one-pieces, they cover your top and bottom. I am supposed to let you choose which you would prefer."
Over the Intercom - A Robotic Male Voice:
"A New Member: Beatrix "Bea" Montgomery has awakened."
The Caisson, the cryo-pod, behind Jesika begins to hisses open. The pod door opening hits Jesika in the back unexpectedly, shocking her, and causing her to fall forward onto her knees. The clothes she was holding all go flying. One grey jumpsuit lands in the hands of Sonny.
The woman inside, Beatrix Montgomery, is revealed. She is a tall, middle-aged woman with reddish-brown skin. Her sleek, black hair is braided and lays against her back. As Bea comes to she scans the room with dark sunken eyes, she's far too confused to speak. She puts on a strong face to hide her fear and confusion.
Out of modesty, Sonny puts on the jumpsuit.
Jesika grabs the first set of clothing she finds on the ground. It turns out to be a jumpskirt, but she doesn't notice.
The Pink-Haired Woman - Jesika:
"H-Here," she pushes the jumpskirt it to Beatrix Montgomery. "I'm sorry it's ruffled, I-I accidentally dropped it. I-" she stops mid-sentence seeing the terror on Bea's face before realizing that she needs to read from the pamphlet to Beatrix... But she lost it. Wherever that pamphlet is, possibly under one of the crumbled mess of clothes on the floor, it's gone for now. Instead, she improvises. Clasping her hands together she says, "IIII wel-come youuu tooo the ship! Please put your clothes on. Please put your clothes on first and then I and others will answer any questions. Oh shoot- I'm supposed to let you choose..." She picks up a ruffled grey jumpsuit off the ground.
The Pink-Haired Woman - Jesika:
"So... Would you prefer a jumpskirt? Or a jumpsuit? They only come in gray sadly..." and then she remembers to say something to both Sonny and Beatrix. "Oh! And both of your ID-cards are in the back of the cryo-pods. Remember to take it out and attach it to your clothes!"
To be Continued
Except for like when your character is talking (speech) since you kind of have to say exactly what you want to say.
You can write like that if you want though. I might have to change things around to fit the narrative.
The Spaceship
After the woman approaches the man, she sticks her hands out. On her right hand are a large pile of grey jumpsuits. On her left hand are a pile of... Also grey jumpsuits? Except they look a bit more frilly? It is difficult to discern the difference. She looks as though she hopes Sonny will take one, but he does not seem to be reacting whatsoever. He just continues to stare.
The Pink-Haired Woman:
"Do you want to...?" she asks as she continues to offer the items, waggling them a bit, while her eyes dart between the clothes and the man. "Oh... Um.. Right."
She stacks the clothing on top of each other in order to pull out a booklet.
The Pink-Haired Woman:
Reading from the booklet, she begins, "Hello there! I am insert name here-... Errr... Opps." she closes her eyes and stops for a second. "I mean... Let me just start over, okay?..."
The Pink-Haired Woman:
"Hello there! I am Jesika, your greeter. And we or I depending on how ma-... um..." she pauses to gather herself. "We... I welcome you to the UTSS 15. The current year is 2225 and you have just emerged from one of our state-of-the-art cryogenic chambers, trademarked as Caissons. You may be confused about many things, but it is important to remember to take things slowly! There is plenty of time to ask all and any questions that you have, and all will be answered appropriately, but we at UnionTransit ask that you first clothe yourself with one of the garments provided, as well as attach your ID Badge, before anything else. This is because-"
Sonny Sunlight:
"What?" interrupts Sonny.
The Pink-Haired Woman - Jesika:
She halts reading and raises her eyes. "Er- Well... Well, you are naked." she mentions, while trying to look away. "One of these is a jumpsuit and the other is a jumpskirt. They are both one-pieces, they cover your top and bottom. I am supposed to let you choose which you would prefer."
Over the Intercom - A Robotic Male Voice:
"A New Member: Beatrix "Bea" Montgomery has awakened."
The Caisson, the cryo-pod, behind Jesika begins to hisses open. The pod door opening hits Jesika in the back unexpectedly, shocking her, and causing her to fall forward onto her knees. The clothes she was holding all go flying. One grey jumpsuit lands in the hands of Sonny.
The woman inside, Beatrix Montgomery, is revealed. She is a tall, middle-aged woman with reddish-brown skin. Her sleek, black hair is braided and lays against her back. As Bea comes to she scans the room with dark sunken eyes, she's far too confused to speak. She puts on a strong face to hide her fear and confusion.
Out of modesty, Sonny puts on the jumpsuit.
Jesika grabs the first set of clothing she finds on the ground. It turns out to be a jumpskirt, but she doesn't notice.
The Pink-Haired Woman - Jesika:
"H-Here," she pushes the jumpskirt it to Beatrix Montgomery. "I'm sorry it's ruffled, I-I accidentally dropped it. I-" she stops mid-sentence seeing the terror on Bea's face before realizing that she needs to read from the pamphlet to Beatrix... But she lost it. Wherever that pamphlet is, possibly under one of the crumbled mess of clothes on the floor, it's gone for now. Instead, she improvises. Clasping her hands together she says, "IIII wel-come youuu tooo the ship! Please put your clothes on. Please put your clothes on first and then I and others will answer any questions. Oh shoot- I'm supposed to let you choose..." She picks up a ruffled grey jumpsuit off the ground.
The Pink-Haired Woman - Jesika:
"So... Would you prefer a jumpskirt? Or a jumpsuit? They only come in gray sadly..." and then she remembers to say something to both Sonny and Beatrix. "Oh! And both of your ID-cards are in the back of the cryo-pods. Remember to take it out and attach it to your clothes!"
To be Continued
